SCRIPT DEVELOPMENT NOTES

Script Notes - Screenplay Analysis Plus Rating Grid
$
80.00    
 
 

Seeking script doctors or story consultants? A script that struggles to hold the producer's interest usually suffers from a combination of under-developed characters, uneventful dialogue exchanges, and meandering storyline. If you seriously want to increase your script's potential to be turned into a film or a one-hour TV show, consider using our service. We work with repped writers and executive producers, including award-winning producers/writers.

Our scene-specific notes will point out weak links in the story. This service is designed to help clients brainstorm and further develop their stories. The script notes will identify major character(s) and scene(s) that cause story roadblocks. The notes come with some suggestions to improve your story. If you are new to screenwriting, please know that this is not "co-writing" service where we would rewrite scenes and dialogue exchanges for you. Additionally, it is not a proofreading service. Our script notes service is geared towards providing creative feedback to help you further refine your story and characters.

   Sample Rating Grid
Overall Rating
Excellent 
Good
Fair
Poor
Character
X
Concept
X
Dialogue
X
Plot
X
Structure
X
    Customers Only

"Thanks for the awesome notes!" - Nancy F.

"These are all EXCELLENT points, especially for creating more tension/conflict to spice up those scenes.  Thanks again for finding 'the rough spots' in the script."  - Jon N.

"Thanks for the prompt delivery of the notes.  I appreciated the critique very much.  It's good to get feedback from an experienced professional." - Rich P.

"Thank you for the very thorough notes.  I loved the notes you gave me.  I like it when the analyst points out the areas that need work without failing to mention the areas that she/he likes.   I really got my money's worth." - Yetunde A.
   Turnaround
  • 4-6 Business Days
  • Scripts received after 6 p.m. (PST) will be scheduled for analysis the next business day.
   Notes + Rating Grid
  • 1.5-4 pages
  • ​A Rating Grid: of Excellent, Good, Fair, Poor on  
    Acceptable Files
  • Adobe Acrobat (PDF)
  • Celtx
  • Final Draft 5-9  (FDR) & (FDX)
  • Microsoft Word
   Requirements
  • Scripts must be formatted to industry standard.
  • Use 12 point Courier type.
Please keep in mind that we are closed on the following Federal holidays: ​​
Jan. 1 - New Year's Day
Jan. 18 - Martin Luther King, Jr. Day
Feb. 15 - George Washington’s Birthday
May 30 - Memorial Day
July 4 - Independence Day
Sept. 5 - Labor Day
Oct. 10 - Columbus Day
Nov. 11 - Veterans Day
Nov. 24 - Thanksgiving Day
Dec. 25 - Christmas Day